“The Highwayman and Typhoid Fever Comparison”

Bess dies trying to warn her love that the red- coats were at her house. Patricia dies thinking in shame for putting her love in trouble. For example, Bess was tied down with a gun pointed at her and if she moved, the gun would go off. For Patricia, she was talking to Frankie and in the Fever Hospital they couldn't talk or read peoms. But she kept going Until the Nun moved Frankie upstairs alone. Frank wanted to hear the end of the Highwayman because he wanted to see how it ended.

“Typhoid Fever– Present Tense Childhood Memory”

I am 9 years old and walking back from school with my sister. As we are walking, my sister gets lazy and asks me to give her a piggyback ride. Now I'm thinking, "No, you can walk!", but as usual she hits me if she doesn't get her way. So she hops on and we begin to walk again. On the way, she sees her friends walking back. She waves at them and they wave back. While she waves, she squeezes her legs into my ribs. It begins to hurt. I let go of her making her lose her balance and falls straight on her. I'm looking at her trying to catch her breath. The fall causes her to lose her breath and back problems.

"The Storyteller" Plot Diagram

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“The Storyteller - Memorable Books from My Childhood”

1. Green Eggs and Ham by Dr. Sues
2. I Just Forgot by Mercer Mayer
3. Where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak
4. The Mitten by Jan Brett
5. If You Give a Mouse a Cookie by Laura Joffe Numeroff

Sam tries to encourage the unknown character to try green eggs and ham, though he meets with little success. The unknown character refuses to taste the dish, insisting that he would not like it. Sam then goes through an assortment of locations and dining partners trying to persuade the unknown character to eat. The unknown character is standing in shallow water after a boat sinks; surrounded by various people and beasts, finally gives in and tries the green eggs and ham on the condition that Sam leaves him alone. He then finds out that he does like it and that he would eat it in the locations and dining partners that were introduced throughout the story.

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“Twenty-Five Random Things About Me”

1. I used to think I was superman when I was 1 years old.

2. My first word was papas when I wanted to eat.

3. When my first tooth fell out, I thought I was dying.

4. When I got my first chain, I thought I was cool.

5. I ate cow tongue at a taco shop, but I threw it back up.

6. I don’t like the way people talk sarcastic towards me.

7. When I was 12, my weight was 147 and when I turned 13, I weighed 127.

8. I love to play the guitar and the drums.

9. My favorite food is fettuccini with parmesan cheese.

10. I like to listen to music because it inspires me to draw.

11. I love to watch action movies while eating junk food.

12. My favorite team for FIFA is the Chivas.

13. I like to play football when I don’t have anything to do.

14. I haven’t been to church since I was 7 years old.

15. When I grow up, I want to be the world’s number one chef.

16. My swimming trunks fell when I dove in the deep end of the pool.

17. I want to go to SDSU for college so I can be an Aztec warrior.

18. My zodiac is a crab, which is a cancer.

19. My first kiss was with my sister’s, Renne, best friend.

20. I think people over their thirties are old, but I will make exceptions.

21. My first bike was a black and orange mongoose.

22. I like to watch Saturday morning cartoons while eating a bowl of Cap’n Crunch.

23. My favorite school subject is math because I love working with numbers.

24. My family nickname to me is “Pansas”, which is embarrassing.

25. My favorite genre of music is Oldies. I listen to them every Sunday on station 92.5.

“My Memorable Days”

My 10 memorable days are:

1. When I was 2, I was taken away from my grandma.

2. When I was 7, my foster dad died from a heart attack.

3. When I turned 9, I got my first 20 dollar bill.

4. I remember when my foster dad bought me a Star Wars battleship from the Swamp Meet.

5. My first time seeing my grandma was in McDonalds.

6. I received my first electric guitar when I was 9.

7. My first trip to Sea World, I bought a stuffed shark as big as me.

8. When I was 11, I found out that my aunt died 3 days before her birthday.

9. I came to San Pasqual on August 16, 2007.

10. When I came back from football practice, I found out that my sister had AWOL.