My 10 memorable days are:
1. When I was 2, I was taken away from my grandma.
2. When I was 7, my foster dad died from a heart attack.
3. When I turned 9, I got my first 20 dollar bill.
4. I remember when my foster dad bought me a Star Wars battleship from the Swamp Meet.
5. My first time seeing my grandma was in McDonalds.
6. I received my first electric guitar when I was 9.
7. My first trip to Sea World, I bought a stuffed shark as big as me.
8. When I was 11, I found out that my aunt died 3 days before her birthday.
9. I came to San Pasqual on August 16, 2007.
10. When I came back from football practice, I found out that my sister had AWOL.
You should talk about how your foster dad past away, I think that would make a good story.
ReplyDeletewhat up oggy my doggy.don't trip you always make it through adversity.
ReplyDeleteYou should talk about the time you were at Sea World.
ReplyDeleteHay whas up room mate i receved my first electric when i was 5
ReplyDeleteI think that you should write about the time you went to Sea World and got thast big shark.
ReplyDeleteI think you should talk about #2, when your foster dad past away.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should write about what you spent the 20 dollar bill on.
ReplyDeleteAugustine, please read and follow directions carefully. Some of the events on your list are missing conflict. Proofread your work before publishing.
ReplyDeleteP.S. "Swap Meet"