Thursday, February 17, 2011

SPA Poem


Some days are good

and some are bad.

People say be grateful

for what you have.


Some days feel like it's lost

and some feel like it's found.

People say get up

if you hit the ground.


We may be surrounded by groves.

We may be surrounded by mountains.

You can say this place looks

like the bottom of many fountains.


This place has its days,

days that you would be amazed.

This place has its days,

days that you would try to get away.


They say this is the best place

out of many places.

A place with many different faces.

Faces of many different races.


We may have our downs

and we may have our ups,

it seems like half empty cups.


We come together.

We come as one.

We come as strangers

that like to have fun.



7 comments:

  1. OMG I like ur poem best poem I luv it its perfect.

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  2. Great Job Augie you should become a poet.

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  3. FANTASTIC JOB!!! This is really one of the best poem that I have seen and read all year. Keep working hard Auggie.

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  4. Nice job Augustine. Try to keep up the good work and then later life will reward you.

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  5. great job ESPOSO!! i liked your poem its true and made sence:)

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