Some days are good
and some are bad.
People say be grateful
for what you have.
Some days feel like it's lost
and some feel like it's found.
People say get up
if you hit the ground.
We may be surrounded by groves.
We may be surrounded by mountains.
You can say this place looks
like the bottom of many fountains.
This place has its days,
days that you would be amazed.
This place has its days,
days that you would try to get away.
They say this is the best place
out of many places.
A place with many different faces.
Faces of many different races.
We may have our downs
and we may have our ups,
it seems like half empty cups.
We come together.
We come as one.
We come as strangers
that like to have fun.
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ReplyDeleteGreat Job Augie you should become a poet.
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC JOB!!! This is really one of the best poem that I have seen and read all year. Keep working hard Auggie.
ReplyDeleteNice job Augustine. Try to keep up the good work and then later life will reward you.
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ReplyDeleteGood job auggie keep it up.
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