“First Persuasive Paragraph”

In my opinion, freshmen students shouldn’t have self passes because they haven’t built the trust from higher authorities on campus. By giving them the privilege to go off campus would be risky because they might get into big trouble and it would have a great cost if they decide to AWOL. Because the freshmen still have the set of mind of middle school, they are more likely to be less mature than the upper class students and misuse the privilege of having self passes. Self passes should be given to students that have earned the trust of adults and are known to be responsible for what they do off campus. That's why freshmen shouldn't have self passes.